The workers of the construction site were angry due to their low payment that they got every week. They were complaining to the government, since they never did anything about it and they didn't heed the warning about overthrowing the government if they didn't do anything about the low payments. They then conspired a plan on how to take over the government officials.
The next day, 50 of the construction site workers marched for the building where the government officials were to be. their feet were stomping on the ground, it made the whole street seem to rumble. all of the men had some sort of weapon: bats, branches, broom sticks and trashcan lids as shields. They stopped in front of the building and waited for while until one of the workers shouted "Go GET EM'!" and thats when they broke the door down and infiltrated the building. They apprehended the only government official there. The people knew there is anarchy now.
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it was good, but also a bit confusing at the bigging, and also try to underline the words because i choulding see where they were.
ReplyDeleteHaha that was nice of them. :P. I liked how you described how forceful the march was, but I think you could double check the last sentence of the second paragraph. Other than that it was really descriptive! Great!
ReplyDeleteNice story man :) realyl liked it xD
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the vocab words. Nice job with the storyy! :)
ReplyDelete:O amazing story!! Keep it up mikkel
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Keep it up, very interesting story(Y). Don't forget to highlight the vocab. ;)
ReplyDeleteMikkel, i think you have to go over this.
ReplyDeleteSo, they only had one government offical?
ReplyDeleteGood story though.
remember to highlight the word and pretty good story
ReplyDeleteGood job, dont forget to highlight the words!
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