I was looking out over my balcony just watching the ocean. It seemed calm and a beutyful color of azure. As soon as I stepped back into my apartment, it started shaking violently and my belonging started falling over which left me in a state of pang. My wive's voice was not audible due to the noise the quake caused. The building was shaking for about 23 seconds until everything went still again. There was no bantering between my wife and I, it left us in astonishment.
We were instructed to leave the building, it was crucial that they evacuated all the people from the building because it might collapse.
The firefighters came due to the fire that just eruptedon top of the building. Though, they seemed very adept about it. The trucks were very capacious which helped the evacuation drill greately. I looked through the window of the firetruck to see the firefighters using copious amounts of water to put out the dancing flames.
They also deployed police officers and other firemen at different locations too. The firemen decelerated the the flames power. The police officers facilitated the evacuation by clearing the roads and helping rescuing other civilians that were in a fitful state.
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Good story but a few mistakes. I've only got one question though- who is your wife? Stop motion II?
ReplyDeleteYou spelled beautiful wrong and the word need to be noticed but otherwise okay story
ReplyDeleteGood use of the words! I like how you put the words into a the story concisely. You spelled beautiful wrong, and there were places where I saw you could used semi colons. But overall, good job!!
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