Making trouble and
Odd
Noises is a favored hobby by a boy named dyvon flanagan
Knowing that he will start a fight he
Enjoys agravating other
Youths
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- i like penguins because they can slide!!!!!!!!! WWWWWWWHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Um...I'm not sure if this is the one for the extended metaphor, but I think it is because I could understand what you were comparing monkeys to. (I think) But anyway, the only thing that I would actually suggest, is to maybe make your topic clearer. Thanks to Natalia's comment, I changed mine to try to give the reader a bit more of a clue. So other than that, it was great.
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